Literacy Narrative Revision Plan

                       During the time I was reading my Literacy Narrative to my group, my group and I  noticed that my essay contained only a little of how this book affected my reading and writing. I only wrote how the book affected me in five short broad sentences. My group, which includes Joe and Porscha, told me that I needed to put those sentences into more detail. Other than that, they said it was good.
                        I enjoyed listening to Joe and Porscha read their essays. Joe's literacy narrative was really good. He had all the things in his essay to make it awesome. Also for Porscha's literacy narrative, she had some sentences and words in there that painted pictures in my head. I thought that was cool, but her essay was like mine but better. Porscha could have put a little more stuff about how it affected her writing.