Monday, May 20, 2013

Writing Remix

Writing Remix
Blog Post “Duck Season”
Welcome to Landon’s Duck Hunting Experience Tour ad. Hi I am Landon Foster and I

am a duck hunter tour guide in Pecan Island, Louisiana. If you are looking for an amazing duck hunt I

am the one to talk to. Ever since I have started this business each year we kill approximately 600

ducks. This is an extreme high in Louisiana. My land is best known as the “Kill Zone”. We kill the

most ducks, and have the second largest land. I do have some rules and requirements if you

schedule a hunt you must have a hunting license, and must have experience with a shotgun. I have a

total of 9 hunting blinds which can hold 2-3 people, and three mud boats that can hold 6 people in

each boat.
We wake up at around 4:00am and leave at 4:30am. So make sure to get some sleep in our nice 3 bedroom trailer, with 9 beds, 2 bathrooms, a living room, and a mud room that keeps your shotguns, boots, waiters, gun bags, and shotgun shells, and a kitchen. Every day of your hunt there will be a little breakfast before the hunt and after a big breakfast filled with bacon, biscuits, eggs, sausages, pancakes, orange juice, milk or chocolate milk, and a small lunch, but a dinner time I will cook up either, steaks, hamburgers and hotdogs, or go down into Abbeville, LA to a fine seafood restaurant called Shucks.
Pricing will be $45 per person and $150 per hunt and children 10 and under are free. But for an extra $35 I will take your group on a fishing trip after the hunt to Rockefeller Wildlife and Fishier lands to catch some red fish and speckled trout or go crabbing.
So if you want to have a wonderful duck hunt and fishing, with amazing food and meet new people call me at 1-800-1234-ducks.
Contact Info.
Work:1-800-1234-ducks
Cell: (225)-321-1234
Email: duckcommander123@gmail.com

1 comment:

  1. Landon, this is a very interesting choice of transformation. It's interesting and quite different from most of the other's I've read. Your portfolio appears mostly intact, but I can't find your actual revisions. Did you post them here?

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